Charyn’s Lincoln: Conjuring Up A President

I recently read I Am Abraham, my fourth Jerome Charyn novel, to review it as part of the author’s current blog tour. When I first read Charyn several years ago I found that I needed to acquire a taste for his writing style. It took some effort but it was worth persevering. By the time I finished The Secret Life of Emily Dickinson, I was absolutely delighted by it and I haven’t needed persuasion to read Charyn’s novels ever since.

So, now you know that I enjoy Charyn’s work, let’s turn our attention to his most recent novel, I Am Abraham. This is how the publisher summarises it:

“Narrated in Lincoln’s own voice, the tragicomic I Am Abraham promises to be the masterwork of Jerome Charyn’s remarkable career.
Abraham coverSince publishing his first novel in 1964, Jerome Charyn has established himself as one of the most inventive and prolific literary chroniclers of the American landscape. Here in I Am Abraham, Charyn returns with an unforgettable portrait of Lincoln and the Civil War. Narrated boldly in the first person, I Am Abraham effortlessly mixes humour with Shakespearean-like tragedy, in the process creating an achingly human portrait of our sixteenth President.

Tracing the historic arc of Lincoln’s life from his picaresque days as a gangly young lawyer in Sangamon County, Illinois, through his improbable marriage to Kentucky belle Mary Todd, to his 1865 visit to war-shattered Richmond only days before his assassination, I Am Abraham hews closely to the familiar Lincoln saga. Charyn seamlessly braids historical figures such as Mrs. Keckley—the former slave, who became the First Lady’s dressmaker and confidante—and the swaggering and almost treasonous General McClellan with a parade of fictional extras: wise-cracking knaves, conniving hangers-on, speculators, scheming Senators, and even patriotic whores.

We encounter the renegade Rebel soldiers who flanked the District in tattered uniforms and cardboard shoes, living in a no-man’s-land between North and South; as well as the Northern deserters, young men all, with sunken, hollowed faces, sitting in the punishing sun, waiting for their rendezvous with the firing squad; and the black recruits, whom Lincoln’s own generals wanted to discard, but who play a pivotal role in winning the Civil War. At the center of this grand pageant is always Lincoln himself, clad in a green shawl, pacing the White House halls in the darkest hours of America’s bloodiest war.

Using biblically cadenced prose, cornpone nineteenth-century humour, and Lincoln’s own letters and speeches, Charyn concocts a profoundly moral but troubled commander-in-chief, whose relationship with his Ophelia-like wife and sons—Robert, Willie, and Tad—is explored with penetrating psychological insight and the utmost compassion. Seized by melancholy and imbued with an unfaltering sense of human worth, Charyn’s President Lincoln comes to vibrant, three-dimensional life in a haunting portrait we have rarely seen in historical fiction.”

I found similarities and differences between this book and Charyn’s previous work. In this novel the author immediately lets us know where the story is going, opening with the final minutes of Lincoln’s life at Ford’s Theatre in Washington D.C. unlike The Secret Life of Emily Dickinson where the story follows Dickinson’s life in chronological order and her dying thoughts are the last words we read. Charyn has squeezed a lot into I Am Abraham and examines important events in the president’s life in considerable detail. It’s an imaginative re-telling of Lincoln’s life. A knowledge of the American Civil War period would help the reader follow the narrative but it’s not essential as the author is more interested in producing a character study of Lincoln than an historical account of his life. Despite this, Charyn values historical accuracy though he has his own way of interpreting it. When I interviewed him about his novel, Johnny One-Eye for my blog he said, “Fiction often has a greater truth than most historical texts. I think of Napoleon, and I read War and Peace to get a sense of that particular time. Novelists see history as story. We’re not burdened by ‘inaccuracies’.”

Considering the book’s title it’s not surprising that its focus is the main character, Abraham Lincoln. As in Charyn’s fictional account of Emily Dickinson’s life, Lincoln is portrayed as Charyn imagines him. The author explores Lincoln’s thoughts, feelings, and desires to illuminate the motives behind his actions. In his own distinct way, often using whimsical scenes and lyrical speech, Charyn creates his character. The writing is very much Charyn’s style. Unfortunately I felt the style is more believable when applied to Dickinson than Lincoln. I have a completely different impression of Lincoln than Charyn does and the character’s voice didn’t ring true for me. I was captivated by the manner in which the story was told but I didn’t believe I was hearing Lincoln telling it. I think it might have worked better if another character had narrated it.

The author puts as much effort into place as he does people and the settings, from rural Illinois to the White House, are vividly rendered. The images they conjure in your imagination aren’t always pleasant as Charyn has an acute eye for the sordid and seedy aspects of life but the places come alive. I felt like I had been transported into America’s past, a very different world from my own.

I Am Abraham isn’t an easy read. It’s long at nearly 500 pages and it’s complex but it’s an interesting interpretation of Lincoln and his era. Whether the author has Lincoln’s voice right or not, it’s a book that will entertain readers and possibly make them reconsider what they think about Lincoln, the man. Historical fiction lovers will find this book a new and unique look at the American president and the Civil War era.

To learn more about Jerome Charyn visit his website and his Goodreads page. I Am Abraham’s details can be found on its Amazon page.

CHARYNJEROME_198About Jerome Charyn: He is an award-winning American author. With nearly 50 published works, Charyn has earned a long-standing reputation as an inventive and prolific chronicler of real and imagined American life. Since the 1964 release of Charyn’s first novel, Once Upon a Droshky, he has published 30 novels, three memoirs, eight graphic novels, two books about film, short stories, plays and works of non-fiction. Two of his memoirs were named New York Times Book of the Year. Charyn has been a finalist for the PEN/Faulkner Award for Fiction. He received the Rosenthal Award from the American Academy of Arts and Letters and has been named Commander of Arts and Letters by the French Minister of Culture. Charyn was Distinguished Professor of Film Studies at the American University of Paris until he left teaching in 2009. In addition to his writing and teaching, Charyn is a tournament table tennis player, once ranked in the top 10 percent of players in France. Charyn lives in Paris and New York City.

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Ask Questions To Find Your Story

We have a guest post today from my fellow Alliance of Independent Authors member, C. S. Lakin. She is visiting Ascroft, eh? to discuss what questions an author needs to ask in order to write a story. It’s useful advice and, after reading through her post, I made a copy of it to have handy when I’m revising my own work.

Well, that’s enough rambling from me – I’ll turn you over to Ms Lakin:

Ask Questions to Find Your Story

by C. S. Lakin

Say What front coverI ask a lot of questions in my line of work as a professional manuscript critiquer and copyeditor. Sure, I also give a lot of suggestions and fix badly constructed sentences. But it’s the questions that get to the heart of the story. Asking authors questions helps them get thinking about what they’re writing and why.

So much important information seems to be missing in so many novels—especially first novels by aspiring authors. Novel writing is tricky; there are countless essential components that all need to mesh cohesively. To me, the key to reaching that goal is to ask a lot of questions.

Questions Create Story

Starting a novel is asking a question. What if . . .? What would someone do if . . .? What if the world was like this and this happened . . .? Then those initial questions lead to more questions, which shape and bring life to characters and story. Questions are the key.

Thousands of hours of critiquing and editing has led me to notice that there are some questions I seem to ask a lot. Which tells me there are some general gaps that many writers have in common in their novel-constructing process. I thought I’d share these questions, because maybe they’ll help you as you work on your novel.

1) Where is this scene taking place? I shouldn’t have to ask this, right? The writer is thinking, Isn’t it obvious? I know where this scene is taking place.

It may surprise you to know that readers can’t read your mind. The biggest problem I see in novel scenes is the lack of sufficient information to help the reader “get” where a scene is taking place. Just a hint of setting, shown from the character’s point of view, can do wonders. And what’s usually missing is not just the locale but the smells and sounds, a sense of the time of day and year, and exactly where in the world it is. 

2) How much time has passed? So many scenes dive into dialog or action without clueing the reader in on how much time has passed since the last scene. Scenes needs to flow and string together in cohesive time. It’s important to know if five minutes or five months has passed, and it only takes a few words to make that clear. Don’t leave your reader in confusion—that’s a bad thing.

3) What is your character feeling right now? This is a biggie. It alternates with “How does your character react to this?” So many times I read bits of action or dialog that should produce a reaction from the POV character, but the scene just zooms ahead with said dialog or action without an indication of what the character is feeling or thinking. For every important moment, your character needs to react. First viscerally, then emotionally, physically, and finally intellectually. If you get hit by a car, you aren’t going to first think logically about what happened and what you need to do next. First, you scream or your body slams against the sidewalk and pain streaks through your back. Keep this adage in mind: for every action, there should be an appropriate, immediate reaction. That’s how you reveal character.

4) What is the point of this scene? This is a scary question. Not for me—for the author. Because if there’s no point to a scene, it shouldn’t be in your novel. Really. Every scene has to have a point—to reveal character or plot. And it should have a “high moment” that the scene builds to.

5) What is your protagonist’s goal for the book? If she doesn’t have a goal, you don’t really have a story. The reader wants to know your premise as soon as possible, and that involves your main character having a need to get something or somewhere, do something or find something. That goal should drive the story and be the underlayment for all your scenes. That goal is the glue that holds a novel together. It may not be a huge goal, and in the end, your character may fail to reach that goal—you’re the writer; you decide. But have a goal.

I actually ask a whole lot more questions than these. And many are just as important to crafting a powerful novel. I’ve found when writing my own novels that if I just keep asking questions—the right ones—I’ll find just the right answers for that story.

If you can get in the habit of continually asking questions as you delve into your novel, you may find it will lead you to the heart of your story.

Thank you, Ms Lakin, for visiting and sharing your writing insights. I appreciate them and I’m sure readers will too.

Readers can connect with C. S. Lakin on her websites, LiveWriteThrive and CritiqueMyManuscript as well as on Facebook and Twitter.

Say What?, Ms Lakin’s recently released grammar reference book, is available as an Amazon print book and an Amazon ebook.

Lakin imageAbout C. S. Lakin: She is a multipublished novelist and writing coach. She works full-time as a copyeditor and critiques about two hundred manuscripts a year. She teaches writing workshops and gives instruction on her award-winning blog Live Write Thrive. Her new book—Say What? The Fiction Writer’s Handy Guide to Grammar, Punctuation, and Word Usage—is designed to help writers get a painless grasp on grammar.

About Say What? The book is a compilation of three years’ blog posts on grammar from the award-winning blog for writers Live Write Thrive. Dozens of writing tips have been added that are specifically aimed at helping fiction writers tighten and improve their writing. Grammar doesn’t have to be boring or difficult! Although Say What? is aimed at fiction writers, anyone seeking to improve grammar and write better and clearer will benefit from reading the short, snappy entries designed to make learning these sometimes-difficult rules a lot of fun.

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Explore The Secret Kiss of Darkness

I seem to have been reviewing lots of novels during the past couple months. I enjoy reviewing but it’s also nice to just read a book for pleasure. So in mid-January I decided to give myself a break and a treat. I have read several novels by Christina Courtenay and enjoyed them so I checked out her Amazon page to see what she’s written recently. I was in luck as she had just released a new novel, The Secret Kiss of Darkness. I downloaded it and started to read. I wasn’t surprised to find that I enjoyed it and quickly immersed myself in the story.  And despite reading it for pleasure, when I finished the book I posted a short review on Amazon to let other readers know the book is worth reading. In my review I said, “I found this story engrossing and a great escape. Talking pictures and fortune telling may not be real but I wish they were.” Since I was so enthusiastic about the novel I’ve invited Christina to visit Ascroft, eh? to answer a few questions about the book. So, welcome, Christina! Let’s get started, shall we?

Tell us about your novel.
Secret Kiss imageCC
: The Secret Kiss of Darkness is a time slip novel set in Devon.  Kayla, the heroine in the present, has her life turned upside down when she almost bankrupts herself to buy a portrait of a mysterious 18th century gentleman at an auction.  Jago, inn-keeper and smuggler, knows there’s danger in stolen moments with Lady Eliza.  Over two centuries separate Kayla and Jago, but their lives become inextricably linked thanks to a gypsy’s spell. Will they find heartache or happiness?  Forbidden love, smugglers and romance!

What prompted you to write about this historical event or era?

CC: First of all, I wanted the hero in the past to be a smuggler and when I did some research I found that this was a period when they were fairly common because of the restrictive laws on importing goods from the Continent.  I also needed to write about this particular time because I used the portraits of Thomas Gainsborough and as he features briefly in the book, it had to be set during his lifetime.  I read up on his life and found that he had visited Devon on several occasions, so the story had to revolve around that.

How closely did you stick to the historical facts? If you used them loosely, how did you decide whether to deviate from them?

CC: When it came to the smugglers, I tried to stick to the facts as I found them so hopefully I didn’t deviate at all in that regard.  For Gainsborough, however, I had to take some liberties as obviously he never painted the portraits of my imaginary characters, but I hope my portrayal of him is as close as possible to how he really was as a person.

What research did you do for this book?

CC: I visited Devon several times, exploring the area while looking for settings for my story.  In the end, I made up a small village based on what I’d seen, and used Saltram House (a National Trust stately home near Plymouth) as the template for the house in the story.  I love the Devon coastline with all the little coves and far-reaching views, and the towns are pretty too.  As I said, I read biographies of Thomas Gainsborough, as well as books about smugglers, or free-traders as they called themselves.  And purely for research purposes, I went to an auction at Sotheby’s in New Bond Street so that I could describe one accurately in the book.  Sadly, I couldn’t afford to buy anything! J

Do you use a mixture of historic figures and invented characters in the novel. Which is more difficult to write? Which to you prefer to write and why?

CC: I did use two historic figures in this novel – Gainsborough and his nephew – but I don’t normally like to do that.  I find it very restrictive as you have to stick to their known characters, while still trying to fit them into your story.  I much prefer to make up imaginary people, that way I’m in complete control of their traits and what happens to them.

In an historical novel you must vividly re-create a place and people in a bygone era. How did you bring the place and people you are writing about to life?

CC: I just try to give a flavour of the time by using appropriate language, as well as the customs and social conventions of that era.  In a time slip novel this can be tricky, because you alternate between the past and the present so it’s hard to remember not to use archaic language in the scenes set in the present and vice versa.  Luckily I have a great editor who helps me to pick up on any mistakes.  Descriptions of clothing help to set the stage as well and just the mention of a tricorne hat or a shift can be enough to indicate where we are.

There often seems to be more scope in historical novels for male characters rather than female characters. Do you prefer to write one sex or the other. And, if so, why?

CC: I enjoy writing both.  Naturally the men had many advantages in the past and so much more freedom, but that just means the heroines have to be more feisty or clever in order to get their way.  It can be great fun to try and figure out how they can manipulate the people around them in order to achieve their goals.  It also means they sometimes need the hero’s help and if he is reluctant to give it, that can create sparks.  I like reading and writing both the male and female point of view as I feel that makes for a more rounded story.

Thanks for answering my questions, Christina. I thoroughly enjoyed the novel and I hope other readers will too. To learn more about Christina visit her website and Facebook page and follow her on Twitter (@PiaCCourtenay). Also check out The Secret Kiss of Darkness Amazon US page and UK page. 

'Promote Me!' portraitAbout Christina Courtenay: Christina writes historical romance/adventure stories, time slip and YA romance. She grew up in Sweden and Japan, loves rock music and dogs. She is currently the Chair of the Romantic Novelists’ Association.

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Leadership: It’s A Marathon Not A Sprint

Today I’m doing something a bit different. I’ve ventured away from the realm of fiction and I’ve invited Gordon Tredgold to Ascroft, eh? to talk about his leadership guide, Leadership: It’s a Marathon not a Sprint and what inspired him to write it. I think many writers will be able to use some of what he learned while writing the book for their own writing.

Leadership-Its a Marathon Not a SprintThe author describes the book as “a pragmatic Leadership guide, explaining leadership principles in an easy to use, easy to understand and more importantly easy implement style.

The book is split into 26 chapters, one for each mile of the marathon. In each chapter I explain a leadership principle in detail, provide examples of that principle being used in a business context, then each chapter concludes with how that principle was applied to my running goal of running my first Marathon at the age of 52.”

Welcome Gordon. I’ll hand the floor over to you.

GT: I’m often asked what made me start to write and also where does my inspiration come from.

I started to write for several reasons, one of them being the usual desire of writing a book, I think all of us would like to be able to do that, and I am no different.

Throughout my career I have often received very positive feedback on my leadership style, which whilst not unique, is a little bit different, and I thought it would be good for me to write about my approach, and to share my thoughts.

This was also good for me, because one of the best ways to learn is to teach, so by writing about my leadership approach it would make me examine it much more closely, increasing my own understanding and hopefully I would also be able to learn and improve my approach.

I also thought it would be good to write a simple, pragmatic leadership book, one which talked about what to do, and also how to do it, with clear examples showing how and what the benefits or issues can be.

I think there are a lot of leadership book which focus on the why, which is interesting from a theoretical stand point, but they were always very thin on the how.

Obviously this is not true of all leadership books, there are some excellent one’s out there, especially by my favourite author Ken Blanchard. Blanchard’s books tend to be very easy to read, pragmatic with great examples, and often taking the form of a story to get the messages across such as in GungHo! Which is a book I fully recommend.

My initial goal was to write a book, but when I sat down and started I found it very difficult, I didn’t lack ideas for the book, but I did lack a structure. So after a week or so of limited progresses I decided to take a different approach. I decided to write a blog, I would right down my ideas as separate individual posts of between 400-800 words. This would allow me to make a start, make some progress, each post would begin as an idea for a chapter of a book and I would summarize an idea and add some examples.

I did this with a view that after a month or so I would have ideas for 30 chapters that I might then be able to put them together as an outline for a book, which I would then be able to flesh out with more details and examples.

I found the writing to be very therapeutic, and also that I enjoyed it, I looked forward to writing my daily blog. Once the initial ideas were all put down I was concerned that I might struggle to keep up the daily routine, but what I found was that I got inspiration for new posts from many sources, either through what was happening in my job, through sports I was watching or in private life.

I began to see things from a leadership perspective and it helped me continue to identify items I wanted to share. One thing I did try and do was to keep politics out of what I was writing, focusing on leadership, but there were so many things that were happening in the news, such as the Gun Control in the US, Banking Scandals, Euro Crisis etc., etc. I did write posts on these subjects but I tried to keep my personal political views out of the subject and try and write about the leadership aspects with an objective view. It wasn’t always easy, and I wasn’t always 100% successful, especially when writing about the passing of Margaret Thatcher.

As of now I have written over 400 posts, I try and write every day, but I usually end up writing 4-5 per week.

About two or three months after starting the blog I decided to run a marathon to raise money for charity in support of several friends who were going through chemo therapy. As a non-runner who had now taken up a big challenge what I found was that much of what I was doing in preparation and training had so much in common with what I was writing about on Leadership, such as Goal Setting, Motivation, Preparation, planning, etc., that it gave me an idea to combine the two things together.

This is how I came up with the idea of the book, Leadership: It’s a Marathon not a Sprint, I would write a book with 26 chapters, each chapter representing a mile of the marathon. In each chapter I would write about an aspect of leadership, provide details and examples on that aspect, and then I would look to explain how I had used that leadership thought to help me with achieving the marathon.

I really liked this idea, one because it gave me a structure for the book which then allowed me to envision the finished product which motivated me to compete it, and also because it allowed me to use my own struggle to complete the marathon as an example of what leadership can help you achieve. It was like I was my own guinea pig for my leadership ideas and approach.

It also had the added value that it gave the book a story, a narrative, which would help keep the book from becoming a dry book on leadership.

Interestingly the whole writing process was a leadership journey too, it was like a writing marathon that mirrored my running marathon. The process took about 12 months, with 6 months needed to create the second draft of the book and then 6 months for all of the production, artwork, and everything that was associated with taking a finished manuscript and converting it into a book.

This was significantly more work that I had envisioned, or let’s say there was so much more to it than I had known. I would say that I did more work after the book was written than I did before: checking references; editing; reviewing; editing; re-writing parts; editing; rewriting whole chapters; and of course editing.

It was a great learning process and often during that last few months I wasn’t sure whether it would ever be completed and the book produced.

I am very happy to have had to book published, that my thoughts are available for people to share, but I think the biggest benefit to me, is my increased understanding not just of leadership in general, but of my own leadership style in particular. The better I can understand my own leadership, the more control over it I will have which will go a long way to helping me improve it.

I will continue to write my blog as I look to carry on sharing my leadership thoughts, but also as I look to continue to improve my leadership, and I would strongly recommend it to any leader looking to improve.

Thank you, Gordon, for your insight into your book and the way you wrote it. As well as learning about a leadership style, readers who are also writers can take some tips from it for organizing their own writing too.

Gordon Tredgold AuthorAbout Gordon Tredgold: Gordon is the author of Leadership: It’s a Marathon Not a Sprint. Learn more about him at his website and about his book on its Amazon page.

He has worked in IT for over 20 years and is a specialist in Transformational Leadership, Operational Performance Improvement, Organisational Development, Creating Business Value via IT, and Program and Change Management. He has an excellent Global and International experience having lived and worked in UK, Belgium, Holland, Czech Republic, USA and Germany. He also has multi-sector knowledge including FMCG, Logistics, Utilities, Telecoms, Aviation, Banking and Finance.

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Reading and Reviewing Romances

Since I participated in the Sweet Romance Christmas Giveaway on Facebook I’ve been reading my fellow writers’ stories. Twelve of us joined together to offer prizes that included a bundle of fifteen of our novels and short story collections. The Giveaway was a great way to make readers aware of our books and an added benefit for me is that I got copies of all the books. So, in between my writing projects, I’m reading and reviewing each of them. I posted my review of Lucy Naylor Kubash’s An Uncommon Prince and Other Stories in December. Now, here’s my reviews of Stormy Times by Beate Boeker and Six Months in Montana by Pamela Kelley.

Stormy Times by Beate Boeker

stormy timesThis book’s cover doesn’t do it complete justice. There is light hearted humour, a feel good story and a puppy that would appeal to anyone but there’s also romance, drama and a mystery. The most memorable aspect of the book for me was the characters. It took me a few pages to get into the story but the characters caught my attention immediately. I was intrigued by the enigmatic Conran and I liked Joanna – and I kept reading to find out what happened to them. Some of the secondary characters also made an impression on me. Joanna’s secretary would exasperate anyone and I wanted to adopt her father. Secondary characters such as these added to the comedy and warmth of the story.

As I read I had a strong sense of the isolated setting and the influence of the small community on the characters. The author used both to good effect to create atmosphere and set up the events in the story. She also deftly puts a completely unexpected twist in Joanna’s hunt for the person who is trying to destroy her veterinary practice which changes the tone of this plot thread – it’s nicely done and in keeping with the feel of the whole book.

English isn’t the author’s first language and there is the odd word or phrase that betrays this but I didn’t find that it distracted me from the story. My overall impression when I finished the last page was that I had spent a satisfying few hours with a couple I liked and rooted for. Stormy Times is just the thing, especially on a winter’s night, for readers who enjoy upbeat romances.

Six Months in Montana by Pamela Kelley

sixmonths-187x300If you’re looking for a love story that you know will have a happy ending this is it. Six Months in Montana is a gentle love story set in the American West – not the west coast, the west that’s humming with cowboys, horses and the great outdoors. A place to get away from the city rat race.

As the main character, Molly, grapples with how she can keep Christian, her childhood friend who she has discovered is now much more than that, I never believed any obstacles were insurmountable. I was always confident that she would sort everything out. Molly deals with Christian’s ex-girlfriend, a job promotion she’s always wanted and Christian’s fear of commitment in the course of the story and I wasn’t surprised that she comes out on top. As I’ve said, this isn’t cliff hanger drama, it’s a feel good story. While I wondered how Molly would win, I didn’t doubt that she would.

The events in the story kept me reading but it’s really the characters that make it. Molly is the girl next door that most people would like to have as a friend. Christian will appeal to many women’s fantasies and Molly’s mother and aunt could be your own relatives. I felt like I knew these characters. Their warmth and humanity give depth to the story.

Without unnecessary detail the author paints a picture of the neighbourhood in New York where Molly lives and the ranch she comes to call home. In my mind I saw vividly the local bar where Molly and her friend Meghan meet each week and I felt the community atmosphere of her neighbourhood. The author’s description of Rose Cottage, the bed and breakfast she runs on the ranch, made me want to book in there for my next weekend break. These captivating descriptions add to the book’s feel good factor.

It’s obvious that the author loves good food and wine as there’s references to both peppered throughout the story, leaving my mouth watering at times. So it’s good that she has included the recipe for one of her favourite dishes as an extra treat.

When you want to relax with a story that will easily pull you along but not jar you on the way, this is just the book. Readers who enjoy romance and women’s general fiction will settle right into Six Months in Montana.

Now that I’ve read and reviewed these novels I’m on to Opal Mellon’s His Only Hope. I’ll tell you about it when I finish reading it. Meanwhile, I hope you have gleaned an insight into these two novels from my reviews.

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A Rainy Day Read

I recently offered to read and review The Rainy Day Killer by Canadian writer, Michael J. McCann as part of the author’s blog tour. You’ll notice that I can’t resist mentioning his nationality – I always enjoy discovering books by my fellow countrymen.

the-rainy-day-killer1-200x300This is how the publisher, Plaid Raccoon Press, describes the book: “A man in a business suit offers the protection of his umbrella to an unsuspecting woman, and several days later she turns up dead on a river bank, raped and strangled. The terrifying serial killer known in the press as the Rainy Day Killer is now hunting new victims in the city of Glendale … whenever it rains.

Homicide Lieutenant Hank Donaghue leads the investigation as the killer begins to communicate directly to him through phone calls and grisly packages containing body parts of his victims. Assisted by FBI profiler Ed Griffin, Donaghue and Detective Karen Stainer pursue an elusive predator who leaves no physical evidence behind.

The timing couldn’t be worse, however, as Karen Stainer’s attention is divided between the investigation and preparations for her upcoming wedding. Distracted and uncertain about her future, Stainer is furious when she learns that the Rainy Day Killer has followed her to Virginia, where the wedding will take place, and that he intends to make her his next victim!”

All the crime novels that I’ve read recently were cosy mysteries. This thriller is a change for me: it’s much darker. The gripping plot never loses its tension and it picked up pace as it neared the climax. I got engrossed in the story and found myself anxious to get back to the book whenever I had to put it down; I had to know what happened next.

The story centres on the hunt for a killer and the law enforcement officers involved in it. The reader doesn’t ‘meet’ the killer until near the end of the book. He tantalises the reader and the police with clues that I couldn’t put together to guess who he might be until the final pages of the book. Even then I didn’t know exactly how he had got access to his last intended victim until the summary in the final scene. It didn’t bother me though as I became so engrossed in the chase and the characters’ lives that I was willing to watch events unfold without second guessing the outcome. I also enjoyed the subplot about the power games within the police department as they endeavoured to appoint a new captain for the homicide department.

There are some graphic descriptions of violent acts such as mutilation of corpses in the book which is to be expected in this genre. I was impressed that the author gave enough detail to create fear and tension in the reader but did not overdo it for the sake of sensationalism or voyeurism.

As I’ve said, this story is about the hunt for a killer and the people involved in it. I found the interaction and sometimes tension between the characters as interesting as the actual case. The main characters, Lieutenant Hank Donaghue and detective Karen Stainer, each have distinct personalities. Donaghue is a somewhat traditional level headed cop who focusses on the job and isn’t interested in the organisational politics around him and Karen Stainer is a gutsy, singleminded cop who lives for her job. At times I found her fervour too extreme to be believable but I did love the scene where she runs out of a shop in her bra to chase the suspect.

I liked the fact that the law enforcement officers weren’t all stereotypical rednecks. Many of them had a tolerance for alternative lifestyles. Whether this is true to life or not I have no idea but I thought it made the characters more interesting because they weren’t completely what I expected.

Although the killer’s victims had minor roles in the story I liked the way the author brought them to life. The police interviews with their friends and families made them real, not just part of the body count. This was especially true of the musician abducted at the shopping mall. When the detectives search her apartment they see a picture of a marginalised person with no prospects but a different picture emerges of a talented, sensitive musician striving to succeed as Donaghue talks to her friend and fellow busker. During this conversation the author skilfully makes the reader care about the victim.

The story is set mostly in Glendale, Washington, DC but it could have been any city. It was only a backdrop to the action. I was more interested in a couple of the other settings. Although there is only a passing reference to Quantico I enjoyed the fleeting glimpse of it as it’s a place I’ve heard of but knew nothing about. I also enjoyed the atmosphere at the Texan barbecue wedding reception in Virginia.

I found The Rainy Day Killer a gripping read from beginning to end. I liked the characters and was grabbed by the plot. I will happily read other books in this series as I think the characters are worth re-visiting and I can wholeheartedly recommend this book.

Readers can learn more about the author at his website and Goodreads page. You can also check out his Mystery and Paranormal blogs. For more stops on this blog tour check the schedule here.

Mike and Cody thumbAbout Michael J. McCann: Michael was born and raised in Peterborough, Ontario, Canada. He earned a B.A. (Hons.) in English from Trent University and an M.A. in English from Queen’s University. He has worked as an editor and a project and training consultant and manager with the federal government. He is an author of crime fiction and supernatural thrillers. His Donaghue and Stainer Crime Novel series includes Blood Passage, Marcie’s Murder, The Fregoli Delusion, and The Rainy Day Killer. He is also the author of the supernatural thriller The Ghost Man and is currently working on another supernatural novel.

 

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Uncommonly Good Stories

giveaway 1In the weeks leading up to Christmas I joined 11 other writers in the Sweet Romance Christmas Giveaway. We offered our romantic novels and story collections as prizes in the contest (read some of my recent posts for more about the contest). We also shared our books with each other. This strengthened the cameraderie between us and gave us some reading material for the holidays. I discovered some good stories and I’d like to tell you about some of these books. I’ll start today with the short story collection by Lucy Naylor Kubash:

An Uncommon Prince CoverAn Uncommon Prince and Other Stories is an engaging collection of romantic short stories that were originally published in Woman’s World magazine. Getting a second chance at happiness in love is a theme that runs through them. Whether the heroine’s first relationship was a happy one or not, she has a chance to learn to love and trust the second time round. I found the stories cheering as love doesn’t necessarily run smoothly but it does triumph.

The women in these stories are ordinary women who discover their hidden strengths and resilience. The men aren’t polished or sophisticated either; their appeal is that they are ordinary men who care and sometimes perform extraordinary deeds.

The stories are set in country towns, coastal villages and remote farms, far from glitzy city life, surrounded by the beauty and majesty of nature. As I read I saw the settings clearly in my mind and was attracted to these places.

I found these stories down to earth. Their plots revolve around issues that affect all of us: dealing with loss, learning to trust others and finding purpose in our lives. They are also poignant and powerful; I was moved and gripped by them. I definitely found the stories in this collection well worth reading.

 

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Have A Mellow, Merry Christmas

A couple evenings ago I heard a lovely rendition of Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas by the baritone singer, Fr David Delargy, a member the classical trio The Priests during their Christmas With The Priests concert in Belfast. The song always evokes a mellow feeling in me, pulls up memories of Christmases past and reminds me of everything I enjoy about the holiday season.

Far AwayIt was good to feel mellow for an evening as the past few weeks have been hectic. Friends and family won’t be surprised to hear that I haven’t had a chance to write and post my Christmas cards yet – I think I may be sending New Year’s greetings this year…

DecadeBk low resWhat’s kept me so busy during the past couple months? Firstly, I was involved in three anthologies that have been launched since late October. I’ve contributed stories to each of them, proofread two of the books and I co-edited one of them. Writers Abroad launched Foreign and Far Away, a collection of writings by expat writers around the world on 21st October.  Fermanagh Writers followed with Tails of the Unexpected, a collection of animal stories and poems on 21st November and finally Fermanagh Authors’ Association’s Fermanagh Miscellany 2014: A Decade of Commemorations was launched on 4th December.

Giveaway 1I also participated in the Sweet Romance Christmas Giveaway, a contest with prizes that included Amazon vouchers and a bundle of 15 romance novels and short story collections. Twelve writers contributed romances to the contest. My contribution was my short story collection, Dancing Shadows, Tramping Hooves which is a mix of romance and ‘feelgood’ fiction. I loved the camaraderie of working with the other writers who submitted romances to the giveaway and I’ve also been enjoying their books. At the moment I’m reading An Uncommon Prince and Other Stories by Lucy Naylor Kubash. The stories are powerful and poignant.

Finally, last week my historical fiction, Hitler and Mars Bars, was discounted for five days in a Kindle Countdown.

DA-DSTH-200x300Launching books and running giveaways and Kindle Countdowns are all about making readers aware of the stories. After all, people can’t read books that they don’t know about. And it takes time to let them know they are there. So that’s why my Christmas cards will be late this year.

Even though it’s tied up my time, I’ve enjoyed getting the word out about all these books and contests.

Tails low resThe one I’ve most enjoyed promoting is Tails of the Unexpected as all the proceeds from sales are going to help Bright Eyes Animal Sanctuary in Co Fermanagh. To let readers know about this book I’ve posted on this blog and on Facebook, talked about it on BBC Radio Ulster and I’ve taken my turn at Christmas Craft Fairs selling copies of it. It felt great every time I saw a book sold as I know the money is going to a worthwhile cause. Launching any book is exciting but the success of this one gives me a special pride.

I’ve done all I can for now to get the word out about all of these books so I’m going to wind down a bit and enjoy the holiday season. There’s a fire in our fireplace and the cat is lounging near it. I’ve already hung a star from the highest bough – it’s a red velvet one with gold trim. So now I’ll just sit back and watch the flames dance in the fire. It’s time to enjoy Christmas and reflect on the past year. After the holiday season I’ll be refreshed and full of new stories to jot down.

I hope everyone reading this post will also have the opportunity to enjoy the holiday season.  Enjoy, reflect and have a mellow, Merry Christmas.

Christmas fire

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Stories For Christmas

Did you enter the Sweet Romance Christmas Giveaway this month? The contest just closed a few hours ago – if you didn’t enter the contest in time, I’m sorry you missed it. The prizes were a bundle of 15 romance novels and short story collections as well as Amazon vouchers. My short story collection, Dancing Shadows, Tramping Hooves was included in the prize bundle. My collection is a mix of romance and women’s fiction, all set in Ireland, past and present. Well, the contest is over unfortunately but all the romances are still available on Amazon. I’ll give you a taster from the first story in my collection, A Link To Her Past:

 

DA-DSTH-200x300“Brenda had never spent much time on her computer before her accident. But, since she twisted her ankle a couple weeks ago and had been housebound, she had been exploring its capabilities – surfing the net they called it. That’s how she had discovered that her local church had a camera filming the Mass and she could watch it. She was glad to find this link to her normal life.

She didn’t know what had prompted her to ask John whether she could see St Michael’s on her computer. When she used to visit her sister in Ballylea, she had attended the church. But she hadn’t been there since her sister moved to town.

It must be several years since I was last there, she thought, surprised.

Why had she even thought of St Michael’s? Maybe John’s questions yesterday about her First Communion had started it. His daughter would make her First Communion this Easter. She told him how she remembered kneeling at the altar rail at St Michael’s in her shiny satin dress with her best friend, Kate McCusker. The dress was handed down from an older cousin but it was nearly new and she loved it. She had smiled at the memory and John had said it was good to see her smile. Then he had searched for the church’s details and had written down the Mass times for her.

She clicked on ‘Watch Live’ and waited as a white pattern swirled around in the middle of the black screen. Suddenly an image appeared. She heard the sound of heels clicking slowly on tiles. Two elderly women shuffled stiffly up the aisle. Brenda watched the congregation filter into the church in ones and twos.

I’ve found it in time for Mass, she thought. She leaned back in her chair, pulling her laptop computer closer to her.

As people continued to file into the church Brenda’s thoughts strayed to when she was a girl attending Mass with her family. It was more than 40 years ago but she remembered it clearly. As the eldest, it fell to Brenda to help mind the younger children. While listening to the priest, she kept her eye on her siblings, glaring at them if they dared fidget or whisper. Sometimes she would steal a glance across the aisle, trying to catch Martin Corrigan looking at her. If their eyes met his face would crease into a smile before he looked away. She tried to shake off the memory. That was, indeed, a long time ago.

Brenda focussed on the computer screen again. Most of the congregation were now seated. A slim, grey haired man walked up the aisle. There was something familiar about him. She leaned forward, peering more closely at the screen. As he slid into a pew a couple rows from the altar she caught a glimpse of his face. This man was obviously older but he was very like Martin. She was nearly sure it was him.

Her forehead creased in a frown. She knew he had moved to Dublin soon after she left for Manchester. So what was he doing back in Ballylea?”

Learn more about Dancing Shadows, Tramping Hooves on its page on this website . Its also available to buy on Amazon.

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A Cosy Mystery With Heart

I recently read Ruby Heart by Cristelle Comby to review it as part of the author’s current blog tour.

02_FrontCoverThis is how the author describes the book: “When elderly client Doris Hargrave informs private investigator Alexandra Neve that her beloved antique ruby heart necklace has gone missing for the second time in a period of over sixty years, Alexandra knows this is no ordinary jewellery theft. The ruby heart is a family heirloom and the only thing that connects an ailing Mrs Hargrave to her parents, who were murdered during the Holocaust.
To solve the case, Alexandra and her business partner, blind history professor Ashford Egan, must sift through obscure Holocaust documents to find out the truth. It’s in this way that they learn of a secret World War II era love affair which could hold the key to all the answers they are looking for. Meanwhile, Egan is under immense pressure from the university to quit his private investigating business, and Alexandra is afraid that a man she trusts will leave her. Again.

When Alexandra begins to receive anonymous threats and her flat is vandalised, this all becomes personal. Knowing that there is someone out there who wants to hurt her, Alexandra vows to find that elusive ruby heart if it’s the last thing she ever does.”

It seems that humour is an integral part of modern cosy mysteries. I didn’t really expect it when I began reading the book but I very much enjoyed it. Alexandra (Lexa) narrates the story and her tone is often flippant and full of deadpan humour. This is one of the things that most appealed to me about the novel – and made Lexa an appealing character.

Lexa and Ash are two rather bumbling private investigators and that adds to the book’s appeal. I liked the pair and wanted them to solve – and survive – their latest case. They aren’t completely inept but they still have a lot to learn about detective work. I admired the way the author handled Ash’s blindness. A handicapped protagonist who has moments of heroism in a crime story is unusual but Ash is portrayed with realism, including his limitations as well as his strengths.

Lexa and Ash are very different from each other and there is a significant age difference between them but they are a good team and good friends. There’s also an unacknowledged attraction between the pair that adds to the story’s tension.

The novel ably weaves together elements of the past in Nazi Germany with a mystery in present day London. Using the clues the author drops into the story, I thought I knew who stole the necklace and why. I was on the right track but I had to read to the end to tie up all the ends. Having an idea ‘whodunnit’ before the last page didn’t make me lose interest – I was engrossed in the private investigators’ lives and had to find out how they worked it out.

Ruby Heart is aimed at the new adult reader and, as the story unfolds, the author gets inside Lexa’s head to reveal the issues and insecurities that concern her as a young adult. While I am past that stage of my life this didn’t deter me from reading the story. Lexa is a well drawn character and I could empathise with her despite our differences.

The novel has a pair of likeable main characters and an intriguing mystery to solve. Despite being a mystery, it is a funny and a feel good story. I think it has a broader appeal than just the new adult market: it will appeal to any readers who enjoy cosy mysteries.

To learn more about Cristelle Comby and Ruby Heart visit her webpage and the book’s Goodreads page and Amazon page.

AuthorAbout Cristelle Comby: She was born and raised in the French-speaking area of Switzerland, in Greater Geneva, where she still resides. Thanks to her insatiable thirst for American and British action films and television dramas, her English is fluent. She attributes to her origins her ever-peaceful nature and her undying love for chocolate. She has a passion for art, which also includes an interest in drawing and acting. Ruby Heart is her second new-adult novel, and she’s hard at work on the next titles in the Neve & Egan series.

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