The Quest Continues

At the end of August I posted some information about Quest, Inc by Justin Cohen. I had intended to review the novel at the same time but I was juggling too many plates and I hadn’t even finished reading the book yet. But I’ve read it now and I’ve written my review.

In my last post about Quest, Inc I included the publisher’s synopsis. You can read it here.

quest cover

Quest, Inc is an interesting mixture of a novel and a self-help manual. It is an engaging story about five personal development experts who put their reputations and their company on the line to convince an investigative journalist that they really can help people change their lives. From the opening scenes when one of the experts, Robert, has to confront his own problems with overeating and obesity to the last few pages when each of the experts is intensely involved with coaching his or her own clients to help them change their lives, it is a story that pulls the reader along. It starts slowly as all the experts are focussed on the dilemmas of one of the experts and one client before it picks up the pace midway through the book as several new clients are added to the experts’ caseloads, creating several storylines that branch out and run simultaneously. At first I found it unsettling to jump from an in depth look at two characters’ journeys to following several characters’ lives at once. I had got used to the original small cast of characters and didn’t want to accept new characters and subplots into the world inside my head. But the new subplots picked up the pace of the story, increased the tension and hooked me.

Early in the story there are several long passages explaining psychological and counselling theories and techniques. Although the reader needs to understand this information and may not be familiar with it, I found some of the passages read like a university textbook. It is more difficult to do but it would have been more effective to filter the information into the story in smaller chunks so it would not interfere with the flow of the plot.

In the novel the motivational experts work with clients who have a wide range of problems. Some of the issues that are dealt with include homelessness, marital breakdown, suicide, inadequate social skills, fear of success, alcoholism, obesity and health problems. The author obviously has an understanding of how to deal with these problems and he presents sound, useful information about them. I don’t know whether he intended the book as a subtle self-help manual but it has tidbits of information that readers may be able to use in their own lives.

The characters are realistic and the issues they face are presented as multi-faceted problems. The experts don’t have all the answers nor do they solve every problem. They can only be effective if their clients want to change. This insight provides a believable resolution to several subplots within the book.

The author has created six main characters, the motivational experts and the journalist, who each has a unique personality and backstory: they complement and contrast each other. Their individual stories engage the reader and the author also weaves their stories together to form a cohesive whole.

The main conflict revolves around the investigative journalist’s challenge to the experts to transform one client’s life. If they fail the journalist will destroy their reputation in print. As the story progresses more clients enter the story, their lives are explored and this initial conflict sometimes fades into the background but I was gripped by the new stories unfolding so I didn’t mind the original plotline sliding away from centre stage.

When I began the novel I wondered whether it might get bogged down in psychological theories rather than be a good story but as I read I got involved in the book: the characters’ lives, their problems and their successes. It did become a good story for me. The only thing that left me unsettled was its cliffhanger ending. It is the first book in a series so the conclusion is meant to compel the reader to pick up the next book. But I would have liked more ends to be tied up in this book. Several important questions were left unanswered and major subplots unresolved. So, there were too many threads of the story left unresolved for me to feel like it had concluded satisfactorily. That said, I will be waiting to read the sequel (with this reader I guess the author achieved what he set out to do …).

Quest, Inc is a book that makes readers think about life and provides some good coping strategies for its difficulties – oh, and it also entertains. It is a good read. 

For more information about Quest, Inc visit Justin Cohen’s website:  

The book is available on Amazon in paperback  and as an ebook

About Justin Cohen: He is the author of four books and seven audiobooks. He produced and hosted a television talk show in which he interviewed some of the world’s top experts on success. As a leading authority on personal development, with an honours degree in Psychology, he speaks, trains and writes in the fields of motivation, sales, service and leadership. Having spoken professionally for nearly fourteen years, he has presented in twelve different countries, and in virtually every industry, to an average of ten thousand people annually.

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Hitler and Mars Bars, the ebook

Coming soon: Hitler and Mars Bars, the Amazon ebook.
The novel will be released as an Amazon ebook during the first week of October.
In my last post I told you a bit about the story – see the post to learn more about it.

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Hitler and Mars Bars Now An Ebook

I first released the print edition of Hitler and Mars Bars in 2008. After some minor revisions were made to the manuscript, the novel will be available as an Amazon ebook on Friday, 28th September.

Would you be interested in reading it? I don’t know but I’ll tell you a bit about the story and you can decide. Hitler and Mars Bars is the tale of a remarkable child and era. Loosely based on historic events, this novel evokes a little known episode in German and Irish history. It is the story of a young boy’s physical and emotional journey from the war-torn Ruhr area of Germany to post-war rural Ireland.

Set against the backdrop of the little known Red Cross humanitarian aid endeavour, Operation Shamrock, it is the story of Erich, a German boy growing up alone in Ireland. He dreams of finding his mother. He yearns for a family who will love and keep him forever. He learns his brother is his ally not his rival. Plucky and resilient he surmounts the challenges his ever changing world presents. Caught in war’s vicelike grip and flung into a new land he must grow and forge a new life.

Reviews have said:

“It’s a riveting story…As a novel it is extraordinarily well researched…. Beautifully written with a strong human story running through it…” Brian D’Arcy, BBC broadcaster, Sunday World columnist, author

“An endearing story…Ascroft is superb in telling the story from Erich’s point of view…The story is both vivid and moving…” News Letter (Belfast)

If what I’ve told you intrigues you, check out Hitler and Mars Bars as an Amazon ebook from Friday, 28th September.

 

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Inside The Motivational World

What do motivators write about? How to change your life around usually. But a recent novel, Quest, Inc., by Justin Cohen, a leading authority on personal development, takes a cheeky look at the world of motivational training.The novel’s synopsis says:“What if you brought together five top personal development experts—equipped with virtually everything we know about unleashing human potential—and gave them some lives to change? Could they really coach anyone to lose fifty pounds, fix a broken relationship, or get rich? What would they do for a homeless person, or a pro-golfer trailing at the back of her league? How about taking the racism out of a racist, or turning a hellish employee into a ray of sunshine?Welcome to Quest, Inc. They say they can change your life. Now, as they’re followed by an investigative journalist from one of the world’s leading news publications, they have to prove it—or be damned as charlatans.

Based on real life peak performance and transformational strategies, you’ll see the highs and lows everyone faces on the road to self-realization—especially the experts. Get ready for breakthrough . . . or breakdown.”

I like the concept for the novel and the excerpt I’ve read from it intrigues me. I have to admit that I had planned to read and review Quest, Inc for this post today. But going a wonderful holiday in the Swiss mountains last week and too many other deadlines to meet pushed my plans right out of my mind so I haven’t even started it yet. But I’m looking forward to reading the rest of the book and I’ll post a review when I’ve finished it – likely toward the end of September.

Meanwhile you can also read an excerpt from the book: http://questinc.blogspot.com/search/label/Excerpt

For more information visit Justin’s website: http://www.justinpresents.com/

About Justin Cohen: Heis the author of four books and seven audiobooks. He produced and hosted a television talk show in which he interviewed some of the world’s top experts on success. As a leading authority on personal development, with an honours degree in Psychology, Justin speaks, trains and writes in the fields of motivation, sales, service and leadership. Having spoken professionally for nearly fourteen years, Justin has presented in twelve different countries, and in virtually every industry, to an average of ten thousand people annually.

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Bird Of Passage: A Portal Into The Recent Past

I’m very fond of books set in Ireland or Scotland, especially in the recent past so when I read, Bird of Passage, it was exactly my type of book. I found the two main characters, Finn and Kirsty, believable and I got caught up in their lives. It’s a moving novel and I think it’s evocative of the era it’s set in. I was so impressed with it that I invited Catherine Czerkawska, the author, to visit Ascroft, eh? to tell me a bit more about the book. Welcome Catherine.

Tell us about your novel.

CC: It’s called Bird of Passage. It is set in Scotland and Ireland and it spans the years from the 1950s to the present day, although I wouldn’t call it a family saga. I think the difficulty of placing it within a particular genre – Historical? Saga? Contemporary? Romance? –  was what gave me so many problems with traditional publishing. It’s not a romance, but it is a love story with a 20th century historical setting. And it’s about how childhood trauma can blight a life and the lives of others. It explores events which took place during the childhood of both main characters, so I suppose it is historical – although I remember the sixties quite well!

What prompted you to write about this historical event?

CC: It isn’t so much about a single event, as about a milieu, and a set of circumstances. When we first moved to Scotland, back in the sixties, when I was quite young, I remember being intrigued by the ‘tattie howkers’ who still came over from Ireland to help with the potato harvest, as they had every year for generations. By the time I was living in Scotland, the conditions in which they were housed were being regulated and improved but they still seemed to be maligned visiting workers. There was a lot of prejudice, as there still is with regard to migrant workers today.  They would be blamed for everything from petty theft to breach of the peace. At the same time, I had been reading about the industrial schools of Ireland, and the appalling treatment of some children. The two things collided in my head and the resulting story is Bird of Passage.

How closely did you stick to the historical facts? If you used them loosely, how did you decide whether to deviate from them?

CC: If I’m writing a historical novel – and I’ve written several – I always like the historical background to be as accurate as possible.  Glaring inaccuracies and anachronisms bother me as a reader and I do try to avoid them as a writer although I’m quite happy to ‘stretch’ the truth a bit. When you’re writing fiction, I think you have to do your research, but then give yourself permission to fictionalise things. Bernard MacLaverty calls all fiction ‘made up truth’ and I think this applies to historical fiction as well – very much so. I suppose I’m trying to recreate a time and place for my readers. With the historical sections of my previous novel, The Curiosity Cabinet, I did a lot of research but wasn’t afraid to include things that might seem anachronistic, but weren’t. I knew a lot about this period. When it’s more recent history, like Bird of Passage, I used some of my own knowledge of the time and place and researched the rest.

What research did you do for this book?

CC: I read extensively about the tattie howkers, (the potato diggers): newspaper accounts and research papers as well as Patrick Macgill’s wonderful Children of the Dead End, which I was already familiar with. I also read a number of harrowing accounts of children who had been placed in Irish Industrial schools including Mary Raftery and Eoin O’Sullivan’s Suffer The Little Children. 

Do you use a mixture of historic figures and invented characters in the novel. Which is more difficult to write?

Dunshee, an important place in the novel

CC: I almost always invent, although oddly enough, the central character in my next book is a real person. But I’ve invented a whole new life story for him, because details about him were very thin on the ground. I read a brief account of some key events in his life and it seemed to me as though something else was going on, so I wrote about it. This is quite a departure for me. But I have a couple more projects planned and they involve real historical characters too, so I’ll know how difficult it proves to be in the next year or so. In Bird of Passage, both Finn and Kirsty are invented, although any devotee of Wuthering Heights (which I am) will probably realise that there is a homage to WH going on there. Not a retelling, or anything so precise – but references to that book.

Which to you prefer to write and why?

CC: I honestly don’t think it will make any difference. I think the pressure with writing about a major historical character would be greater though: so many experts prepared to tell you that you’ve ‘got it wrong’! I’ve written historical non-fiction, as well as fiction and of course you approach that quite differently. With fiction, so long as you avoid howlers, I think you must allow yourself a certain freedom to invent, even when you’re writing about real people. It is fiction, after all.

In an historical novel you must vividly re-create a place and people in a bygone era. How did you bring the place and people you are writing about to life?

Ardminish Bay

CC: In Bird of Passage, I drew largely upon my own experience of small Scottish islands and how those societies function, and of Dublin, and – of course – my own Roman Catholic background. I worked in Dublin one summer, back in the early 70s and had very vivid memories of what it was like back then. My mother’s family were Irish people who had come over to Leeds, and I had a background of knowledge there too. I think the trick is to research, then write. In writing, you find out what you don’t know, and can go back and find out about it. In many ways, I write to ‘find out.’ There is an event in Finn’s childhood which colours everything – I can’t say what it is, because we don’t find it out until the very end of the novel, and Finn himself has blotted it out of his mind. I spent months not knowing what it was either. It was as though I too had to find it out, had to ‘remember it’ along with Finn. I woke up in the middle of the night, thinking ‘that’s it. That’s what happened!’ But I could no more have ‘made’ that happen than fly in the air.

There often seems to be more scope in historical novels for male characters than female characters. Do you prefer to write one sex or the other. And, if so, why?

CC: I suppose it depends upon the period. I don’t think I have any preference, quite honestly. In Bird of Passage, I cared as much about Kirsty as I did about Finn. But I’d say that – as a woman – I still like to try to get inside the heads of my male characters and see what makes them tick. My work in progress is essentially a novel about male friendship verging on love (and betrayal too) so the two main characters are both men. But I have a couple of ideas for future work which both involve historical women. I don’t really think I have a preference. The ideas present themselves and I write them. I suppose I’m an instinctive writer, and that’s how I like it.

Catherine Czerkawska

Thanks for answering my questions, Catherine. You’ve given me greater insight into Bird of Passage and also whet my appetite to read your other novels.

Catherine writes in a wide variety of forms: short stories, plays, novels, non-fiction books, essays and articles. She tutors creative writing and she is on the committee of the Society of Authors in Scotland.

Readers can visit Catherine online at her website and her blog.

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The King’s Mistress: Hiding In Plain Sight

I recently met Gillian Bagwell through the Historical Novel Society. Gillian is the author of The Darling Strumpet and The King’s Mistress. Whenever I meet another historical fiction author (or any writer for that matter) I’m always curious about their writing life. So, it’s no surprise that I’ve invited Gillian to visit Ascroft, eh? and answer a few questions for me. Welcome Gillian. Let’s get started, shall we?

Tell us about your novel

GB: The King’s Mistress is the first fictional account of the story of Jane Lane, an ordinary English girl who risked her life to help the young King Charles II escape after the Battle of Worcester on September 3, 1651. His defeat by Cromwell’s forces set off one of the most astonishing episodes in British history—his desperate six-week odyssey to reach safety in France, which came to be known as the Royal Miracle because he narrowly eluded discovery and capture so many times.

Jane became involved because she had a pass allowing her and a manservant to travel the hundred miles to visit a friend near Bristol—a major port where the king might board a ship. In a story that sounds like something out of fiction, the 21-year-old king disguised himself as her servant, and she rode pillion (sitting side-saddle behind him while he rode astride) along roads traveled by cavalry patrols searching for him, through villages where the proclamation describing him and offering a reward for his capture was posted, and among hundreds of people who, if they had recognized him, had every reason to turn him in and none—but loyalty to the outlawed monarchy—to help him.

It was an improbable scheme. Charles was six feet two inches tall and very dark complexioned, not at all common looking for an Englishman of that time. But time after time he rode right under the noses of Roundhead soldiers without being recognized.

If he had been caught, he would certainly have been executed, and it is an open question whether the monarchy would have been restored as it eventually was after the death of Oliver Cromwell. What Jane did took great bravery, and she risked not only her life but the lives and lands of her family, as the fugitive king had been proclaimed a traitor, and anyone who helped him would be executed for treason.

What prompted you to write about this historical event?

GB: While researching The Darling Strumpet, my novel about Nell Gwynn, I read Derek Wilson’s book All the King’s Women, about the numerous women important to Charles II. As all of us who know anything about Charles II are aware, he liked women! His mistresses were many and famous, whether loved by the people like Nell Gwynn or hated like the French Louis De Keroualle. So I was intrigued to read his account of Jane Lane, and convinced by the evidence he set forth for his belief that she and the king became lovers during their travels.

Although Jane was quite famous after the Restoration, she eventually faded into the shadows of history. When my agent was submitting Darling Strumpet to publishers, she asked me who I’d like to write about next. I remembered Jane Lane, and was surprised and pleased to discover that no one had written a novel about her adventures with Charles.

How closely did you stick to the historical facts? If you used them loosely, how did you decide whether to deviate from them?

GB: As with my other books, when the facts were known, I used them. After Charles was restored to the throne in 1660, he told the story of his escape over and over. Others who were involved in rescuing him also recorded their parts in it, so for much of the six weeks Charles was on the run there is almost an hourly account of what he did, said, wore, and ate. The route he traveled is known, and the Monarch’s Way footpath can still be followed.

Jane left Charles and returned home when it appeared that he would shortly be able to find passage on a boat from the southern coast of England, and the details of her story aren’t as well known. When her part in helping Charles escape was discovered, she fled with her brother and walked to Yarmouth, hoping to reunite with Charles in France, and eventually ended up at the court of Charles’s sister, Mary of Orange. From these bare facts I had to write the rest of her story, piecing together what seemed likely or possibly with some pure imagination.

What research did you do for this book?

GB: A lot of reading, as I always do. I used the many accounts of Charles’s flight, including his own words, which he dictated to Samuel Pepys years later.

priest hole

I also set out with a friend to retrace the path that Charles had taken from Worcester to Jane’s neighborhood in Staffordshire, and their travels after that. Some of the sites associated with Charles’s adventures are well preserved.  It was thrilling to visit Boscobel House and Moseley Hall and to see the actual priest holes into which the fugitive king curled his six-foot-two-inch frame when hiding from Cromwell’s cavalry patrols. Whiteladies, where Charles arrived at about three a.m. on the morning after the battle, is now a ruin, a short walk from Boscobel.

Contemporary accounts provided the general route that Jane and Charles took, through Bromsgrove, where Charles’s horse threw a shoe; to Stratford-Upon-Avon, where they had to ride among enemy soldiers crowding the street; and down to Long Marston, where they stayed at the home of Jane’s cousins John and Amy Tomes. They spent the next night in Cirencester, and reached Abbots Leigh near Bristol the following evening.

Finding that no ship would leave Bristol for France or Spain in less than a month, they then made their

Whilteladies arch

way southward to Castle Cary and then to Trent, in Dorset, where they stayed at the home of the Royalist Wyndham family.

          We received much-appreciated help from many people on our journeys. The current owner of Trent Manor welcomed us into her home and showed us the chamber where Charles had stayed, now her own bedroom. The Earl and Countess of Aylesbury graciously allowed us to visit the beautiful grounds of Packington, where Jane lived after she returned to England and married.  When we weren’t sure about the location of a place we were trying to find we had very good success by popping into pubs to ask the locals, and in this way we were helped by the staff and patrons of the Red Lion in Bromsgrove, the Crown in Cirencester, and the George in Castle Cary.

I also had to recreate Jane’s walk to Yarmouth without being able to actually follow in her footsteps, and wrote about that process in a post on the Penguin Author Blog

Do you use a mixture of historic figures and invented characters in the novel? Which is more difficult to write? Which to you prefer to write and why?

GB: I much prefer to be able to tell a story using the people who really lived it.  In this case, the real people and actual events are better than anything I could invent, and almost all of the characters are based on historical people.

For the six weeks that Charles was on the run, he was sheltered and aided by dozens of people—mostly simple country folks and minor gentry—who not only could have earned the enormous reward of £1000 offered for his capture, but risked their lives to help him.

When Jane Lane was in Paris and then at the court of Mary of Orange, she came to know all the royal family and Charles’s exiled friends and supporters. She certainly knew Anne Hyde, who was a lady in waiting to Mary of Orange and eventually married the Duke of York (later James II) and became the mother of Queen Mary and Queen Anne, and I chose to have Jane intimately involved in the drama surrounding Anne’s romance with and marriage to the duke. She likely knew Lucy Walters, who was Charles’s lover when he was young, and who he was rumored to have married, and I chose to have her involved in that story as well.

In an historical novel you must vividly re-create a place and people in a bygone era. How did you bring the place and people you are writing about to life?

GB: Visiting the sites involved in a story helps me re-create the world the people in the novel inhabited. I’m pretty steeped in everyday life in seventeenth century England and am always learning more. To me the details of a character’s life—what she would have worn and eaten, how she washed her clothes, how she took care of herself and what she did about illnesses—help me really get into her skin and mind and really put myself in her place as I’m writing.

Fortunately there is a lot written about Charles II and especially about his flight after Worcester, with a lot of interesting details.  When I had Charles tell Jane about the parts of his adventures when she wasn’t with him, I was able to use his own words some of the time, as he told the story to Samuel Pepys, who took it down in shorthand.

There often seems to be more scope in historical novels for male characters than female characters. Do you prefer to write one sex or the other. And, if so, why?

GB: Men have of course historically had more freedom to go off on adventures, but there are plenty of real women from the past who led very interesting lives, and so far my protagonists have all been women. I love being able to tell the story of a woman who did something exceptional, especially when her story isn’t as well-known as it deserves to be, like Jane Lane’s.

Most readers of historical fiction are women, and it’s certainly the belief of my agents and editors that books with female leads appeal more to female readers. But Charles II plays a very big part in this book, as he does in The Darling Strumpet, as seen through the women’s eyes.

Thanks for answering my questions, Gillian. I haven’t read The King’s Mistress yet but I’m looking forward to getting into it.

Gillian Bagwell’s novel The King’s Mistress, the first fictional accounting of Jane Lane’s adventures with the young King Charles, was released in the U.K. on July 19. (It was published in the U.S. in 2011 as The September Queen). Her first novel, The Darling Strumpet, based on the life of Nell Gwynn, is a finalist for the Romance Writers of America’s RITA award for Best First Book. Her third novel, Venus in Winter, about the formidable four-times widowed Tudor dynast Bess of Hardwick, will be published in the U.S. in July 2013. Visit Gillian’s website to read more about her books and her blog Jane Lane and the Royal Miracle  to learn about her adventures researching the book and the daily episodes in Charles’s escape after Worcester.

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Monkey On The Wing: Steve Adams Shares His Life

My guest today is Steve Adams, an Aussie larrikin, who led an action packed life until an accident left him severely injured and blind. He’s joining me to answer a few questions about his life and his autobiography, Monkey On The Wing.

Welcome Steve. First of all what’s an Australian larrikin?

A larrikin is a word usually used in an affectionate way, to describe a bloke who has little respect for authority, societal norms and even themselves. What some might jokingly call a rapscallion.

Tell us about your book. 

This autobiography is inspirational on many levels, funny and thought provoking, and takes the reader on a journey, most can only dream about. It’s been described as beautifully written and has been broken up into 107 short chapters, each one standing  alone, but melding seamlessly with the ones before and after. Monkey On The Wing is guaranteed to arouse every emotion in the reader and the story has an extremely dramatic twist that shows how, almost any level of adversity can be overcome. The book comes highly recommended and has the rare quality of covering three genres – travel, biography of an Aussie larrikin and inspiration.

What prompted you to write about your experiences?

After losing my sight in a horrific accident 14 years ago, I reflected from my hospital bed how I wanted my future children, one day, to know there is a lot more to their dad, than someone with a disability that has caused him to lose his independence. Throughout the 18 months of my recovery and rehabilitation, the desire became stronger and the idea of writing Monkey On The Wing was born.

Is this the first book you’ve written? Was it difficult to write about your life? 

Monkey On The Wing is my first book. My story wasn’t hard to write, once I got started, as it was in my head for a long time. However the difficulty was how to get it from my head and onto paper. It wasn’t until my friend and future editor, Meg Lane, gave me some good advice on how to get started, that I was able to open the ink vein and during the next two years, the book virtually wrote itself.

Probably the biggest hurdles to overcome were of course, being blind, the fact that I only have the use of my middle right finger to type, and that I had never used a computer or typewriter before. In order to write my book, I had to spend 1 year at the Western Australian Blind Association, learning the functions of a computer.

In writing a true story there are some people who are going to be hurt and although not my aim, it is a story about my life and I had to show what shaped me. I must take this opportunity to thank those people, for it was they who provided me with the fortitude that I needed when the time came.

What’s life like for you now?

 

Steve in the Canadian Rockies

Through my life experience I have learned that if you want something, you must make it happen and since my accident I have lived by that. My life is as full as it’s ever been, has taken on new direction and never stops moving forward.

 Please tell us anything else that you wish to about your book and your life.

Monkey On The Wing is far more than just a story. It is a journey through childhood and teen years where it speaks of, not so much taboo subjects, but the life experiences, some very negative, that many of us go through and tend to ignore because of embarrassment or denial. The reader is then taken on a journey all over Australia and the world, that will show how truth really is stranger than fiction. Unlike most inspirational books, this one shows with great honesty, ways in which a person can reach for the stars and instead of being left with just the promise of great things, can actually realize their dreams.

Throughout the book and my life, my philosophy of moving forward, and not wasting time on regrets or looking back is apparent. Living that way I have been able to see opportunities more clearly, as they present themselves and life has remained adventurous.

Thanks for answering my questions, Steve. Readers now know a little bit about you and your life. So let’s give them a taste of Monkey On The Wing:

CHAPTER FORTY FOUR

EAST MEETS WEST

I had no schedule when I left Alice Springs, so when I came across the turnoff that led to Ayres Rock, I decided I’d go and have a look. As I stood on a road in the middle of Australia I marvelled at the harsh, dry beauty of the place and considered how easy it would be for those early explorers to go missing.

I imagined a lost man out there and felt great pity for him, for although the country was soft in its beauty, its arid harshness would show no mercy to a man dying of thirst.

Not too long after, I saw a green panel van that was heading north and I was very happy to see it pull over. I made my way to the passenger side window where I was surprised to find a Japanese fella gesturing for me to put my gear into the back of his van, so I stowed it and joined him in the front.

The first thing he did, was offer me a cold can of beer from a large esky sitting beside him on the bench seat. He didn’t drive off straight away and as we introduced ourselves, I realised with a smile that he could hardly speak English. However, I understood his name was Egar. Once the formalities were over we took off for Ayres Rock.

As Egar and I hurtled along in the centre of Australia, with Simon and Garfunkle cranked up on the stereo and the beer flowing freely, I quickly realised my new friend was drunk. Although I was enjoying myself, I was tired from my night in Alice Springs so I gestured to Egar that I wanted to have a sleep in the back. He looked a bit disappointed that I was piking out on him but he pulled over anyway and I got into the back of the van and fell straight to sleep.

A bit later, Egar woke me up shaking my leg saying, “Big rock, big rock,” so I got up. What I saw when I got out of the van blew me away. We were still about seventy or more clicks from The Rock, but from that distance its sheer size could be put into perspective. Although I’d seen pictures of it, I could never have imagined it in reality. It was massive and its colours of red brown and ochre were amazing.  Click to continue reading.

Monkey On The Wing by Steven Adams is available as a hard copy through his website or as an e book through Smashwords.

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The Siren Of Paris Alerts Us To War’s Reality

I’ve just finished reading Siren of Paris by David LeRoy and it’s a story that will stay with me for a while. It has a complex, well developed plotline and presents the story in a tantalising way, jumping back and forth between 1939-40 and 1943-44. As I pondered developments in the story important elements of the plot were revealed at just the right moment. I’ve read quite a few books set during the Second World War and often find them very moving. But this one especially gripped me.

The publisher’s blurb says: “The story starts in 1939, when Marc Tolbert, the French-born son of a prominent American family, takes off for Paris to follow his dream of becoming an artist. Marc’s life soon sparkles in the ex-pat scene in Paris. His new friend Dora introduces him to a circle that includes the famous Sylvia Beach, owner of the bookstore Shakespeare & Company; and he accepts a job with William Bullitt, US ambassador to France. At art school, he finds himself further enchanted by the alluring model Marie.

Marc’s Parisian reverie, however, is soon clouded over by the increasing threat from Germany. As Americans scramble to escape Paris, he finds himself trapped by the war, and nearly meets his fate on the disastrous day of June 17, 1940, aboard the RMS Lancastria. Upon returning to Paris, his fate grows more troubled still, as he smuggles Allied airman through the American Hospital to the Paris Resistance underground, until a profound betrayal leads him into the hands of the Gestapo and onto Buchenwald.”

Although I’ve never experienced a war, the book seemed to be a realistic portrayal of wartime. Scenes of conflict and death were sometimes graphic, grim and very disturbing but this gave authenticity to the book. I think what gripped me most about it was the main character, Marc Tolbert. He is an antihero. He didn’t ask to be in the position he finds himself in and he does whatever it takes to survive. He has flaws and real, soul destroying fears. He makes me think about how I would react in the same situation and I can’t say I’d be any braver or selfless than he is. Self-preservation rather than patriotism motivate him and I think this is one of the most honest depictions of wartime that I’ve read.

In this engrossing story the author looks at people caught in a war and their reactions to it from a completely different perspective. It’s unsettling but I think it’s real and it is a good story. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys war dramas or studies of the human psyche or just a good read.

Because I enjoyed the book so much I’ve asked David LeRoy to answer a few questions about the novel. Welcome David.

Tell us about your novel.

DL: The Siren of Paris is the story of one French born American male who runs off to Paris in 1939 to study art as a way of getting over a failed relationship back in the States.  He becomes trapped by the war along with all other Americans when the Germans sink the Athenia on Sept 4th, 1939, and due to a series of circumstances he finds himself on the doomed RMS Lancastria on June 17th, 1940.  After a few months, he returns to Paris for the duration of the war. He is motivated primarily out of survivor’s guilt to try and do something to make up for the fact that he survived the sinking, but his British friend died.  His third return to Paris brings him betrayal that leads him to Buchenwald.  In the course of this novel, my young immature American has all of his innocence burned away, transforming his consciousness.  

What prompted you to write about this historical event?

DL: At first, I intended to write a remarkably brave novel about an American in the French Resistance.  I was doing transportation research to try and determine just how Americans might get home from Europe after the war broke out.  I stumbled upon the RMS Lancastria.  The Titanic, although tragic, is also a rather romantic story.  But the Lancastria is just tragic and also haunting once you read the details of the sinking.  I decided to look for some way to bring the victims to life in a story. The best way appeared to be through the experience of one fictionalized survivor named Marc Tolbert.  
 

How closely did you stick to the historical facts? If you used them loosely, how did you decide whether to deviate from them?

DL: I followed the historical facts so closely, that I even included the traveling circus that was coming down the Loire Valley as France fell to the Germans.  When I do deviate from the historical record, it is to tell the story of my character Marc.  For instance, Joan Rodes, the British Nurse who saved 19 men from the waters of Saint-Nazaire did lose her baby two days later.  However, the relationship she has with my character and the role she plays in the story is fictionalized, but consistent with her personality during World War Two. 

Overall, I tried my utmost to use real historical events in this story to give the reader the feeling of experiencing World War Two.  Sometimes those facts do not synch up with our expectations.  I did not know that many of the arresting agents for the Gestapo in Paris had no guns and just ran around with brief cases like traveling salesmen wearing civilian clothes.  Our imagination wants to have a tall proud German in a SS Uniform with a machine gun, not a brief case full of papers.  

What research did you do for this book?

DL: I read 46 books, and all of the newspapers in French up to the War, and many all through the War.  I read Nazi papers and whatever French resistance papers I could find.  I bought various historical items on Ebay. I did quite a bit of research on Buchenwald and the experience of returning from a concentration camp after the war.  One book in that collection tells me everything I needed to know about Nazi occupied buildings in Paris. 
 
Do you use a mixture of historic figures and invented characters in the novel. Which is more difficult to write? Which to you prefer to write and why?

DL: There is only a small handful of purely fictional characters in the book.  William Bullitt, Sumner Wells, Sylvia Beach, Jacques Lusseyran, Jean, Georges, The Jackson Family, R, and the RMS. Lancastria is extremely real. Even Drew who brings Marc food is based upon a real person. In addition to the people, the traveling circus, horses, dogs and the rabbit are also real. Marie is based upon real person, who died in 1947 at the hands of another person she betrayed.  And Officer Sean is based in part upon a real German from the army.  Even the lovely man playing the piano at 180 Rue De La Pompe in Paris is a real person from the historical record who consequently was tried for war crimes in the 1950’s. My preference was to create a fictional character, and follow him through a not so fictional world. 

In an historical novel you must vividly re-create a place and people in a bygone era. How did you bring the place and people you are writing about to life?

DL: Perhaps you are familiar with the service during Easter called Tenabrea. The altar is stripped, and all the candles are extinguished in the church, symbolizing the darkness of the valley of death as Christ approaches the Cross. 

In The Siren of Paris, at the end of chapter two, I draw attention to the fact that the lights are turned out in the main dining room of the S.S. Normandie where the statue La Pax resides.  For the next 41 chapters I construct the world of World War Two using small relevant details, but I am deconstructing all peace, love, joy, faith, hope, and trust in my characters’ journey.   This is done to create one thing, which is the most difficult of all to recreate about World War Two, and that is the fear and dread.  I push the protagonist back and forth between life and death until he is not sure of which world he resides in the most.  I tear away his trust of the living and build up his trust in the ghosts of the dead.  The only hope that soon remains is only in the heart of my character.  The goal is to just help the reader to feel the war on an emotional level, so when Marc is hanging near the rear of the line for morning soup at a concentration camp, hoping to get some solids at the bottom, the reader knows and feels the hunger driving my character.  

In addition to these small details, I drew upon Jungian Psychological images such as the butterfly, peacocks, rabbits, and the raven.  Marc experiences lucid dreams during the war of people he has known who have died, and these dreams have a precognitive element to them, creating a sense of anticipation.  However, aside from all the small tricks, the macro image is a stripping the altar of life of everything until there is nothing left but my character, struggling with the darkness of the war and protecting his own light from going out.   I do close the story with light, but it is a new light that is internal to the character and brings final resolution to the spiritual crisis of my character as the story opens. 

There often seems to be more scope in historical novels formale characters rather than female characters. Do you preferto write one sex or the other. And, if so, why?

DL: I am not sure if I lean towards one or the other, but I certainly do like to balance my characters.  Marie is actually a difficult character to pull off and I found earlier readers objecting to her based upon common stereotypical bias of what a real woman is all about.  Throughout the story, she is emotionally distant and closed off, usually demonstrating characteristics more in synch with a strong male character.  To balance Marie, I explored two other female characters in this story that also hold down important roles in the book that give another view of how women reacted to the war.  When working with female characters, I like to have a strong motivation and determined will to achieve a goal.  My next book has a female protagonist who is just 11 years old, yet has a stronger will than all of the adult characters combined.  But back to gender, something that I seek to achieve is a combination of both feminine and masculine traits in each of my characters, because in life I rarely experience anyone who is completely masculine, or utterly feminine.  The Siren of Paris is a perfect example of this, because I have a leading male who is more feminine in personality characteristics, in a relationship with a powerful woman who dominates him emotionally.  On the physical layer, the dominant gender role is different than on the emotional and spiritual level of the character.  

Thank you David for your insights into The Siren of Paris.

For more information about the author and novel visit his website .   To purchase a copy of the ebook visit its Amazon Kindle page .  

About David LeRoy: A Native of California, LeRoy received a BA in Philosophy and Religion at Point Loma Nazarene College in San Diego. The degree served him well while selling women’s shoes, waiting tables, or working odd jobs after college until settling in the field of telecommunications, where he has worked for the past 18 years. Early on, he demonstrated artistic abilities. For many years, David marketed a line of fine art photographic prints through various galleries and retail outlets.

During a visit to France to study art in the fall of 2012, LeRoy became intrigued by the French Resistance, particularly when his research revealed the role of Americans in the Resistance, as well as the limited means of escape from Europe as the war escalated. He drew upon his longtime interest in philosophy, the visual arts, myth, storytelling, psychology, and Ocean Liner travel to write Siren of Paris.

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Definitely Not Reluctant To Read Shoban Bantwal’s New Novel

Last year I read my first novel by Shoban Bantwal. Fullmoon Bride was an old fashioned tale in a contemporary setting. The novel presented a slice of life rather than a larger than life story but, even without nail biting drama, the gentle story held my interest to the end of the book.

Using simple details of domestic life, Ms Bantwal captured the nuances of family interaction. She also developed the protagonist into a believable character.

She has created an equally enjoyable story in her latest novel, The Reluctant Matchmaker. It’s a new plot but all the elements that make her books a good read are included. I would recommend The Reluctant Matchmaker to readers who enjoy relationship-centred stories.

The publisher’s summary of The Reluctant Matchmaker: “It starts with a bizarre accident. Petite and successful Meena Shenoy’s contented life turns upside down when she collides, literally, with her strikingly tall boss, Prajay Nayak, and suffers a nasty fall. But when she discovers that he’s a bright, caring, family-oriented man, she’s attracted to him. When he unexpectedly asks her to meet him in secret, she wonders whether he feels the same way about her.

Meena walks into his office that evening with high romantic hopes. Imagine her shock when instead of declaring interest in her Prajay makes an astonishing request: He wants her to craft a personal ad that will help him find a suitable wife – a statuesque, sophisticated Indian-American woman who will complement his striking height.

Despite her feelings for Prajay and the complications of balancing work and her “marriage consultant” role, Meena can’t refuse the assignment, or the generous fee attached to it. While she nurses her bruised heart, Meena comes to some surprising realizations about love, tradition, and the sacrifices she will—and won’t—make to fight for the man she loves.”

I’ve asked Shoban to join me today to talk about The Reluctant Matchmaker. Welcome Shoban.

SB: Dianne, first of all, thank you for reviewing my book, and for a great interview. I appreciate your interest in my latest novel, The Reluctant Matchmaker.

Tell us about your novel

SB: It starts with a bizarre accident. When young and petite Meena literally collides with her strikingly tall boss, Prajay, she takes a nasty fall, but doesn’t count on falling in love with him. So imagine her dismay when he makes an astonishing request: He wants her to craft a personal ad that will help him find a suitable wife — a statuesque, sophisticated Indian-American woman who will complement his remarkable height. Despite Meena’s attraction to Prajay, she can’t refuse his assignment, or the generous fee. While balancing the complications of work and her “marriage consultant” role, she comes to some surprising realizations about love, tradition, and the sacrifices she will—and won’t—make to win over her giant.

What prompted you to write this story?

SB: Being a very petite woman and happily married to a small-statured man for over three decades, I have always wondered what kind of a relationship a tiny woman would have with a giant of a man. All my stories have their roots in the concept of “what if?” The Reluctant Matchmaker started with “what if” a diminutive woman fell in love with a big man. To raise the stakes even higher and add some conflict to an already unconventional match, I needed my tall hero to want a suitably statuesque woman to complement his remarkable height, even though he is somewhat attracted to the tiny heroine. The Reluctant Matchmaker became the story of just such a conflict.

The Reluctant Matchmaker explores Indian culture in America which some readers may not be familiar with. Is your intended reader Indian American or from any ethnic background? How do you acquaint non-Indian American readers with the culture the book is set in?

SB: While all my books are meant for readers of all ethnicities, they are primarily oriented toward a non-Indian audience, and mostly women. Indian-Americans are already familiar with the immigrant experience since they are living it, so they are not all that curious to read about it in fiction. However, I find that second and third generation Indian-American women are avid readers of my books. They can genuinely appreciate and relate to the challenges and experiences my young characters confront while straddling two diverse cultures.

As for acquainting my non-Indian readers with Indian culture, I do it by offering them a different kind of fiction that is more entertainment than intellectual stimulation, what I call Bollywood in a Book. Most South Asian authors write serious literary novels, which are beautifully written, but are often short on plot. Not all readers are fond of slice-of-life literary books, so I decided to give them commercial fiction that introduces them to Indian culture in the form of fun, romantic stories, filled with drama, colorful characters, emotional plots, and intriguing cultural elements.

The main female and male characters in the novel are well drawn. Do you prefer to write one sex or the other. And, if so, why?

SB: My books are marketed as women’s fiction with romantic elements, therefore I write mostly in the female point of view. I find it a little easier to write in the female voice than the male, perhaps because I grew up in a family with all sisters and no brothers. Also, women’s stories are more emotional as compared to men’s, and I like to pour feelings and internal musings in my tales.

While some of my books do have alternating chapters with both male and female viewpoints, The Reluctant Matchmaker is entirely the heroine’s story, hence it is narrated in the first person. 

Thanks for visiting Ascroft, eh? and answering my questions, Shoban. Good luck with your new book.

About Shoban Bantwal: She is an award-winning author of six multicultural women’s fiction books with romantic elements and numerous short stories, branded as “Bollywood in a Book.” Her articles have appeared in The Writer magazine, Romantic Times, India Abroad, India Currents, and New Woman. The Reluctant Matchmaker is her latest novel. Shobhan lives with her husband in Arizona.

For more information: about The Reluctant Matchmaker and Shobhan Bantwal’s other books, visit her website  or the book’s Amazon page to order a copy. The full virtual tour schedule is available at: http://bookpromotionservices.com/2012/06/03/reluctant-matchmaker-tour

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Ebooks Can Be Any Length

Ebooks can be any length – that may be evident to you but I just started thinking about it recently and it really pleased me. I’ve only had a Kindle reader for about a year but I’m a ‘convert’ – you’d have to wrestle with me to take it away.

For me this revelation means that I can put my huge trade paperback copy of Diana Gabaldon’s Breath of Snow and Ashes back on the bookshelf. It was always too heavy to carry around with me and it takes up too much space on the coffee table. I now have this book and the sequels on my Kindle.

It also means that I have access to lots of shorter works, like Tim Hodkinson’s All the King’s Thanes and Nina Croft’s Chosen. And I can also publish collections of my own shorter works, like Dancing Shadows, Tramping Hooves,

For more of my meandering thoughts on this topic see my post on Writers Abroad’s blog today.

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